The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the current and future
water
supply in Australia from different sources.
Overall
, it can be seen from the diagram
water
is collected in
dams
or
storage
and supplied to the consumers.
In addition
,
wastewater
is sent back to the
water
treatment plant and rainwater goes to rivers. It is conspicuous that
water
is stored in big
dams
or
storage
facilities, where it is sent to households, factories, cities, and retail shops.
Next,
the remaining
wastewater
is sent to
dams
/
storage
, and
then
that
water
is sent back to the
water
treatment plant, where it is purified and made drinkable for other purposes. Probing ahead, the rainwater , which cannot absorbed into the soil, flows into rivers and it saves us from flooding. Flooding
water
cannot be usable because of its cost to purify .
Finally
, the
wastewater
comes from
dams
or
storage
and citizens'
wastewater
,
then
filtered and made drinkable for everyone, so they can consume it again.
Furthermore
,
this
process is unstoppable and continues again and again.
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