Your apartment manager is asking your opinion about the swimming pool in your building. Currently, your building has a swimming pool, but it is really old and needs to be renovated. Some tenants prefer to have a small gym instead of a pool. The apartment manager has asked you to complete an opinion survey. Choose the option that you prefer. Why do you prefer your choice? Explain the reasons for your choice.

Personally, I consider that keeping the swimming

pool

will be the most suitable option for the building.

Although

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having a gym is a good idea, it will probably be more costly than keeping the swimming

pool

which is already built.

Firstly

, implementing the

pool

maintenance will imply a minor budget

instead

of constructing a new building space

such

as a fitness room.

Secondly

, the swimming

pool

is a demure social space for families and people of different ages allowing them to relax, to interact, and to work out.

Hence

,

this

facility fosters a sense of belonging in the community.

Thirdly

, as a resident, I consider

this

option to be more versatile since it allows residents to get health benefits, to enjoy with their families and friends regardless of the season as it is located indoors, and has easy access.

According to

what was aforementioned,

this

is my opinion, but I will support whichever decision the residents would make. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to express my views.