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The maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the developments that took place in
Meadowside
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 and the neighbouring town of
Fonton
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. The maps show the area in three periods: 1962, 1985, and the present.
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, both places had large growth and development of buildings and facilities over the period and now have joined into one large area with
Meadowside
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village
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Village
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 now being a suburb of the town of
Fonton
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. In 1962, the towns were completely separated from each other.
Meadowside
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 had a
road
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 running through it from the southwest to the northeast,
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Fonton
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 had a rail line passing through from the southeast to the northwest. By 1985, both areas had expanded significantly. There was now a
road
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 linking the village and the town,
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 the old
road
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 had
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 been made bigger to match the size of the new one. In
Meadowside
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, a housing estate, a leisure
center
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centre
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, and a
super-store
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superstore
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 had been built next to the first
road
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. Currently,
Meadowside
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 and
Fonton
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 have joined and the empty area that used to be between them now has a business park to the south of the
road
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 and a hotel to the north.
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, a train station has been added next to the
road
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 with a new line connecting to the old one.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meadowside, fonton, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • rural area
  • expansion
  • infrastructure
  • commercial development
  • housing development
  • population growth
  • key landmarks
  • transformation
  • local community
  • economy
  • environmental impact
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