You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.
#minutes #friend #schools #difficulty #advice #suggestions #friends #clubs #school #activities #addresses
Hello Billy,
It 's
long
time ago Add an article
a long
what
I Correct word choice
that
hearing
about you. How are you?
I heard that you are part of our school already. I Wrong verb form
heard
thing
that you Correct your spelling
think
make
a great choice, because Wrong verb form
made
of
Change preposition
apply
this
school is so amazing. Linking Words
This
University is Linking Words
a
very good for sports Change the article
apply
activity
like Fix the agreement mistake
activities
fotball
or basketball and Correct your spelling
football
what
I remember, you have been always Change preposition
from what
good
Correct article usage
a good
fotballer
. So I am able to help you find some Correct your spelling
footballer
frineds
here.
First of all, I have Correct your spelling
friends
great
idea how you can make more friends in the Add an article
a great
fotball
Correct your spelling
football
team
. I know Use synonyms
few
guys from the Correct article usage
a few
team
and they meet every Monday and Wednesday in the Use synonyms
fotbal
club at the Correct your spelling
football
stadion
after 4pm. I am more Correct your spelling
station
like
Change preposition
apply
sur
they will be very happy to see Correct your spelling
sure
now
face in the Correct your spelling
new
team
. We could visit Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the fotball
fotball
club together on Monday and I will introduce Pavel Correct your spelling
football
capitan
Change the capitalization
Capitan
of
the Change preposition
to
team
.
You are very funny guys so I think you Use synonyms
havn't
be Correct your spelling
haven't
problem
Add an article
a problem
for
you find some Correct word choice
if
frinds
Correct your spelling
friends
on
the university.
Change preposition
at
And if
so, let Correct word choice
If
my
know and Correct pronoun usage
me
i
Change the capitalization
I
could
help you Wrong verb form
can
how
muchCorrect word choice
as
I
can.
I hope that will be ok for you and please let Correct word choice
as I
my
know Correct pronoun usage
me
vwhere
we meet you on Correct your spelling
where
the Monday
.
Warm regards,
PetrChange the article
Monday
a Monday
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Grammar
Start with a friendly salutation, for example, 'I hope you’re doing well.' and then respond to the letter with 'It's been a long time since I heard from you.' rather than 'It 's long time ago what I hearing about you.'
Task Response
Make sure to include specific examples to support your claims, such as describing clubs or activities in detail that your friend may be interested in rather than general statements.
Grammar
Avoid spelling mistakes by proofreading your letter. For instance, 'fotball' should be 'football' and 'frineds' should be 'friends.'
Writing Tone
The letter expresses a supportive and encouraging tone, which is suitable for the context of giving advice to a friend.
Task Response
You've included some specific suggestions for ways to make friends and get involved, such as joining the football team.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.