The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs compare and make predictions about the amounts of 6 various kinds of fuel
energy
consumed in the U.S. from the year
1980 to 2030.
It is clear that
petrol and oil, coal energy
saw a sharp increase since the year
1980. However
, the remaining four kinds of energy
, natural gas, nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower remianed
relatively stable.
First of all, the top consumption in 1980 was petrol and oil, amounting to 35 Correct your spelling
remained
quadrillion
, which will rise noticeably to around 50 quadrillion
in 2030. At the smae
time, the fuel Correct your spelling
same
energy
coal exhibited a similar trend, increasing from 16 quadrillion
to approximately 30 quadrillion
from 1980 to 2030. However
, natural gas which saw a marginal decline since 1980 at 20 quadrillion
, highlighting the year
2015 as the turning point, remained relatively stable from 2015 to 2030 at the consumption number around 25 quadrillion
.
In addition
, the other three fuel engery
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energy
nad
hydropower, all maintained at around 3 Correct your spelling
and
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in the Change to a plural noun
quadrillions
year
1980, which were the least consupmtion
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consumption
at
that Change preposition
in
year
. Specifically, nuclear and solar/wind showcased a marginally increasing trend to 6 quadrillion
and 5 quadrillion
respectively. While
hydropower illustrated some flucations
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fluctuations
at
the first Change preposition
in
30
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30-year
year
period, stayed at 5 quadrillion
since
2010 to 2030.Change preposition
from
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