Morden society
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developed in a skyrocket way in various
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like technology, health and leisure activities. Investment
ofChange preposition
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advanced
medicine
and therapies has made defeating diseases possible, it is said to be one of the
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that allow people to live longer.
This
essay is about to discuss possible effects on
healthcare
systems and professional
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on society.
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span may have a crash on the
healthcare
and economic
system
. Some of the research
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age is one of the most significant
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onChange preposition
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getting disease as their immune
system
starts degenerating.
ElderlyCorrect article usage
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have a higher chance
to visitChange preposition
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hospital
regardingChange preposition
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to
the Correct article usage
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problemFix the agreement mistake
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like heart attack and insomnia caused by their
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body function. That means the
healthcare
system
like
hospitalFix the agreement mistake
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and elderly
centerFix the agreement mistake
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must
a larger number of
patientFix the agreement mistake
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who have chronic
conditionFix the agreement mistake
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that may create a huge stress on the medical
system
.
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An increasing
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number of aged
patientFix the agreement mistake
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also
challenges the economic
system
by forcing
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to allocate more financial and human resources
thatCorrect word choice
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used to be in
other fieldChange the wording
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to meet the need
ofChange preposition
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long-term care.
In addition
,
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increaseReplace the word
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number of older
adultFix the agreement mistake
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passing the retirement age can reduce
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in the workplace
thatCorrect pronoun usage
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contributeCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to a lower GDP.
To add on, investment
ofChange preposition
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medical science may have a problem
onChange preposition
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ethics and health. Publishment of a new
medicine
requires
hugeAdd an article
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effort
onChange preposition
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testing its reliability and effectiveness. It takes
relativelyCorrect article usage
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long testing time and several
roundChange to a plural noun
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of animal and participant
.
However
,
due to
the rising demand
ofChange preposition
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geriatric
medicine
, there may be a chance of
medicine
aiming to earn
profitFix the agreement mistake
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from the elderly market,
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the process of testing new
medicine
to get published. If a
medicine
is not being fully experimented and tested, it could have a
of having serious side
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that harm our life.
To conclude
, it is good to see how advanced
medical science
haveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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extendChange the verb form
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our life by defeating disease. But there are
also
some
drawbackFix the agreement mistake
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like stress on
healthcare
and economic systems and possible side
effectFix the agreement mistake
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on new
medicine
.