The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph illustrates the number of people visiting

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and from the United Kingdom between 1979 and 1999

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the bar chart gives information about favourite cities visited by tourists from the United Kingdom in 1999. It can clearly be seen from the line graph that more

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tourists travelled out of the

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compared to visits to the

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by foreign travellers throughout the period. The chart shows that France was the highest state

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Turkey was the lowest travelled state for

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tourists in 1999. The graph shows that

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both trips to and from the

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increased throughout the given period, the trips out of the

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residents were higher. Started at around 13

million

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, in around 1985 visits abroad reached 20

million

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and continued to significantly increase to over 50

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in 1999.

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, trips from the

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began at 10

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in 1979, steadily increased to 20

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in 1994 and increased moderately to 1999. The bar chart shows that around 11

million

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people from the

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visited France in 1999, making it the highest, with Spain coming slightly lower at around 9

million

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, USA and Greece were only visited by around 3,5 and 2,5

million

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residents, respectively.

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, only approximately 2

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travellers went to Turkey in 1999.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

222 words

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