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the pie charts shows the comparison of differetn kinds of energy production of france in 1995 adn 2005

the pie charts shows the comparison of differetn kinds of energy production of france in 1995 adn 2005
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The Pie graphs illustrate the contrast
of
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 different categories of
energy
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 production (
Gas
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,
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petro
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petrol
, coal, nuclear and others)
of
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in
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 France in 1995 and ten years later.
Overall
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, the proportion of
gas
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,
coals
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coal
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, nuclear and other unnamed
source
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 of
energy
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 increased slightly.
Gas
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, coal and
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petro
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petrol
 were the dominant
energy
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source
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 in 1995,
however
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,
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petro
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petrol
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had
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decreased in 2005. The percentage of
gas
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 and coal was 29,63 and 29,80 in 1995 with a minor increase of 0,68% and 1,13% in 2005 respectively.
This
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source
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 makes a total of more than 60% of the total amount of
energy
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source
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 production. The nuclear and other sources of
energy
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 increased by around double from 6,4% to 10,10% and 4,9% to 9,10% respectively in the given period.
On the other hand
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,
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petro
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Petro
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 had a significant decrease of just around 10% in 2005 which
leave
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 it to a total of 19,55%.
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,
petro
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 is only a fifth of the total proportion of
energy
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 sources in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas, petro, source with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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