the pie charts shows the comparison of differetn kinds of energy production of france in 1995 adn 2005
The Pie graphs illustrate the contrast
of
different categories of Change preposition
between
energy
production (Gas
, petro
, coal, nuclear and others) Correct your spelling
petrol
of
France in 1995 and ten years later.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, the proportion of gas
, coals
, nuclear and other unnamed Fix the agreement mistake
coal
source
of energy
increased slightly. Gas
, coal and petro
were the dominant Correct your spelling
petrol
energy
source
in 1995, however
, petro
usage Correct your spelling
petrol
had
decreased in 2005.
The percentage of Unnecessary verb
apply
gas
and coal was 29,63 and 29,80 in 1995 with a minor increase of 0,68% and 1,13% in 2005 respectively. This
source
makes a total of more than 60% of the total amount of energy
source
production. The nuclear and other sources of energy
increased by around double from 6,4% to 10,10% and 4,9% to 9,10% respectively in the given period.
On the other hand
, petro
had a significant decrease of just around 10% in 2005 which Change the capitalization
Petro
leave
it to a total of 19,55%. Correct subject-verb agreement
leaves
Thus
, petro
is only a fifth of the total proportion of energy
sources in 2005.Submitted by ouazilhakima010 on
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