You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email -give details of the purchase -describe the problem -explain why you need a replacement urgently Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
email in order to show
my dissatisfaction Verb problem
express
about
Change preposition
with
clothes
that I purchased from your website. I have ordered a set of suits which I Correct article usage
the clothes
though
that Correct your spelling
thought
it
would be suitable for a wedding party. I loved the colour and style which were elegant but somewhat unique. As soon as I opened the package, I noticed that the right side of Correct pronoun usage
apply
sleeve
was ripped. I thought about fixing that part but I could not because of the unique shape.
As I mentioned earlier, the wedding party is coming in 2 Add an article
the sleeve
weeks
time. I really liked the design of Change noun form
weeks'
this
clothing and this
is why I would like to ask you for an urgent replacement. It is one of my important friends’ wedding and I would like to attend that party happily. I hope you would
understand my situation and Wrong verb form
will
would
be able to ask my favour. I look forward to hearing from you and receiving a new set.
Yours faithfully,
MikaWrong verb form
will
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task achievement
Provide a clearer description of the problem by specifying what the expected condition was and how the actual product varied from that expectation.
coherence cohesion
Strengthen the coherence by using more varied transition words and phrases to connect your ideas more smoothly.
coherence cohesion
The letter starts and ends appropriately with a proper greeting and closing.
task achievement
The overall tone of the letter is polite and suitable for the context.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.