The chart below shows the changes in UK's birth rate for women in six different age groups from 1973 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes in UK's birth rate for women in six different age groups from 1973 to 2008. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the changing birth
rate
in the UK for
women
,who are in different age groups between 1973 and 2008.
Overall
,
It is clear that
only adult
women
,who are 30-35 and 35-39's birth
rate
increased.
Women
's number in other groups decreased. Girls'
rate
,who are under 20 decreased from 60 to 40, between 1973 and 2008.
Although
mothers who are in 20-25 gave over 120 births per 1000 in the starting period, their numbers fell from dawn till 95 in the end.
Furthermore
,about 75 births per 1000 were given by mothers,who were in their thirties in 1973 and
this
number increased to approximately 84 in 2008.
Additionally
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in
1973
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1973,
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40 children were born per 1000 by 35-39-year old mothers, the interesting fact is that after 1988
this
number jumped to more than 60 and did not change till 2008.
Moreover
, 40+-year-old
women
's birth
rate
decreased from 20 to 14 in all periods.
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