The table below shows the percentage of members of parliament who were women in five regions, compared to the percentage of worldwide, in 1990, 1997 and 2005.
The line chart illustrates the proportion of female members of government in Germany,Italy,France, the
UK
and Belgium
in twelve years starting from 2000.
All the numbers increased every year however
, the highest number increased in the UK
.
Analyse the chart Germany and France were growing slowly but still,they are in the top three with the highest of nearly 37% and 32%. Italy grew a bit fast after 2008 and jumped to a peak in the chart at the end
of the year 2012.Only in the
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Belgium
numbers declined
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,the UK
started with 3% and Belgium
started with 17%. In 2008 the UK
grew rapidly in number and reached near Belgium
,both ended with the same number of 23% at the end
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