The line chart below shows the per capita meat consumption in four different countries (USA, UK, Brazil and India) from 1985 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the per capita meat consumption in four different countries (USA, UK, Brazil and India) from 1985 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the consumption of non-vegetarian meals from animals and birds per person in the
USA
,
UK
,
Brazil
and India in 34 years starting from 1985. Analyse the chart shows that meat is not too popular in these years,
however
,In the
USA
it was always in demand. In the top three
countries
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countries,
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the
USA
,
UK
and
Brazil
meat consumption is more than 50 persons.The
USA
started with 90 in 1985 after slowly
reached with
Wrong verb form
reaching
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140 in 2009 and the numbers remained the same in 2014 and slightly declined in 2019. On the other side, the
UK
and
Brazil
's trend inclined rapidly and reached with same number 100 in 2005 but after that
Brazil
jumped rapidly and hit with number 130
at the end
of time. The
UK
ended with only 110 . The India is only
who
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one who
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started with below 20
however
, grown gradually in 2000 crossed the number 20 and ended at 40 in the end but is still at the bottom of the char
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • per capita
  • consumption
  • line chart
  • trend
  • significant changes
  • remained stable
  • comparison
  • cultural factors
  • economic factors
  • environmental factors
  • infer
  • meat consumption
  • data suggests
  • period
  • shift in rankings
  • consumption patterns
  • observed data
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