The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The data in
2008
report Correct article usage
the 2008
illustrate
the usage of energy in Correct subject-verb agreement
illustrates
United
States from 1980 with forecasting details to 2030. From an Correct article usage
the United
overall
perspective, it is clear that
petrol and oil are the most consumed, hydro power
Correct your spelling
hydropower
as well as
solar/wind has considerably less consumption compared to other energy.
Regarding fossil
fuels Change preposition
Fossil
such
as petrol and oil, coal, natural
gas Correct word choice
and natural
has
a sustainable development throughout the period. Petrol and oil started at 35 Correct subject-verb agreement
have
quadrillion
units
in 1980, then
fluctuated until 2000. It is forecasted to be a skyrocket
trend, rising to around 15 Change the verb form
skyrocketing
quadrillion
units
in 2030. Moreover
, the data of other non-renewable resources: coal and natural gas, are anomalous for 40 years, and coal has had its place in the consumption chart as it is predicted to increase to more than 30 quadrillion
units
in 2030.
Contrastingly, cleaner energy fuel sources all began the period at under 5 quadrillion
units
, and show
a notable decline in their use, with the exception of nuclear as it Wrong verb form
showed
rised
slightly to around 6 Correct your spelling
rose
raised
rises
quadrillion
units
. Hydro power
is projected to remain relatively unchanged until 2030.Correct your spelling
Hydropower
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