The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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The data in

2008

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the 2008

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report

illustrate

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illustrates

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the usage of energy in

United

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the United

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States from 1980 with forecasting details to 2030. From an

overall

perspective,

it is clear that

petrol and oil are the most consumed,

hydro power

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hydropower

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as well as

solar/wind has considerably less consumption compared to other energy.

Regarding fossil

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Fossil

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fuels

such

as petrol and oil, coal,

natural

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and natural

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gas

has

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have

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a sustainable development throughout the period. Petrol and oil started at 35

quadrillion

units

in 1980,

then

fluctuated until 2000. It is forecasted to be a

skyrocket

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skyrocketing

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trend, rising to around 15

quadrillion

units

in 2030.

Moreover

, the data of other non-renewable resources: coal and natural gas, are anomalous for 40 years, and coal has had its place in the consumption chart as it is predicted to increase to more than 30

quadrillion

units

in 2030. Contrastingly, cleaner energy fuel sources all began the period at under 5

quadrillion

units

, and

show

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showed

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a notable decline in their use, with the exception of nuclear as it

rised

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rose

raised

rises

slightly to around 6

quadrillion

units

Hydro power

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Hydropower

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is projected to remain relatively unchanged until 2030.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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183 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

energy consumption
projections
renewable energy
non-renewable resources
sustainable
fossil fuels
nuclear energy
biofuels
hydroelectric power
solar energy
wind energy
trends
increases/decreases
shifts
milestones
significant
forecast
implications
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