The chart balow shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of axports in 2016 compared with 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where rejevant

The chart balow shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of axports in 2016 compared with 2016.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where rejevant
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The chart below illustrates the proportion of earnings from
export
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exports
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in different categories of
products
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during 2015 and 2016.
Overall
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,It can be seen that All the product categories showed an
increase
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in 2016,
however
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, gems and jewellery showed decreases in proportion in 2016. In 2016, petroleum
products
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showed an
increase
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of 3% than in 2015.
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this
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, it can be seen that gems and jewellery showed a decrease of 5.18% in 2016. Engineered
products
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and petroleum
products
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were almost the same in 2016. Agriculture
products
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showed a slight
increase
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in 2016 of about 0.81%.The point worth noting is that textiles showed the highest
increase
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from all the categories
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around 15.24%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, increase with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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