You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the percentage of journeys made by different forms of transport in four countries, The bar graph shows the results of a survey into car use in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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Accordingly
, both two charts reflect the vehicle that people
like to travel
with. There are many information
about Change preposition
of information
people
's choice
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choices
on
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of
transportation
that we can see.
According to
the frist
table, most Correct your spelling
first
people
in Canada chose to travel
by a
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apply
car
which comes to 90% of the investigation. What come
next is walking by about 5%; Correct subject-verb agreement
comes
while
3% of Canadians select the public transporation
in Correct your spelling
transportation
travel
, 1% of Canadians selectively chose to travel
with
bicycle or other vehicles. Change preposition
by
For
the Belgium Change preposition
Of
people
, 72% select
the Wrong verb form
selected
car
; 12% chose the
public Correct article usage
apply
transportation
; 11% chose to walk and the remaining 3% chose other transportation
. Also
, In the table, 58% Germanies
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of Germanies
travel
by the
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apply
car
, what come
next is 18% Change the verb form
comes
in
public Change preposition
by
transportaion
, 11% Correct your spelling
transportation
in
walking, 2% Change preposition
by
in
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by
bycycle
and 1% Correct your spelling
bicycle
in
other Change preposition
by
transportation
. For the Netherland people
, 47% of them chose to travel
by car
, 26% by bycycle
, 18% by walking, 8% by public Correct your spelling
bicycle
transportation
and 1% in any other form.
Accoring
to the second chart, there are many reasons for Canadian Correct your spelling
According
people
to travel
by the
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apply
car
. About 37% of them claim that there are no alternative
other than Fix the agreement mistake
alternatives
car
. 30% of investigators use Fix the agreement mistake
cars
car
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cars
due to
their need in work; while
21% think cars are pretty convenient, 13% say cars are quicker than other chocies
. And about 8% Correct your spelling
choices
travel
by car
due to
nightshift work.
The two different charts focus on one
same topic--Correct determiner usage
the
transportation
choice. And their
are Replace the word
there
large
amount of Change the article
a large
people
, even from different
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a different
country
, mainly Fix the agreement mistake
countries
chose
to Wrong verb form
choose
travel
by the
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apply
car
. And many Canadian people
have no alternative choice when it comes to transportation
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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