The pie charts below show the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts compare the share of 3
carbohydrates
, fat and protein
in three types of diet
. All in all, carbohydrates
have the highest percentage on
healthy Change preposition
of
diet
types and fat has the lowest percentage among all categories.
Foods in healthy
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a healthy
diet
for sport are mostly consist
of Change the verb form
mostly consist
carbohydrates
which takes
60% of the share. Followed by Change the verb form
take
protein
, occupying a quarter of the whole proportion. And fat comes last
with only 15%.
Carbohydrates
takes
half Change the verb form
take
proportion
of Correct article usage
a proportion
healthy
Correct article usage
a healthy
diet
. There is 5% more of
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apply
protein
and fat in healthy
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a healthy
diet
, compared to healthy
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a healthy
diet
with the aim for sport, with 30% and 20% respectively.
In contrast
with the 2 categories, an average diet
consists of the same exact share of carbohydrates
and protein
which is 40%. The percentage for
fat is the same with Change preposition
of
healthy
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a healthy
diet
which is only 20%.Submitted by ameliahanakaru01 on
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