The pie charts below show the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts compare the share of 3
carbohydrates
, fat and
protein
in three types of
diet
. All in all,
carbohydrates
have the highest percentage
on
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healthy
diet
types and fat has the lowest percentage among all categories. Foods in
healthy
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diet
for sport
are mostly consist
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of
carbohydrates
which
takes
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60% of the share. Followed by
protein
, occupying a quarter of the whole proportion. And fat comes
last
with only 15%.
Carbohydrates
takes
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half
proportion
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a proportion
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of
healthy
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diet
. There is 5% more
of
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protein
and fat in
healthy
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diet
, compared to
healthy
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diet
with the aim for sport, with 30% and 20% respectively.
In contrast
with the 2 categories, an average
diet
consists of the same exact share of
carbohydrates
and
protein
which is 40%. The percentage
for
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fat is the same with
healthy
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diet
which is only 20%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbohydrates, protein, diet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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