The table presents information about university-level academic staff in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the changes
number
of university academic staff by nine subjects in 2005 and 2013. Obviously, there was
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were
a
positive trends in almost all Correct article usage
apply
subjects area
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subject areas
experienced
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experiencing
increase
in Add an article
an increase
number
of academic staff, but there Change the article
a number
the number
also
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was also
some
reduced Correct determiner usage
a
number
of staff in two
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the two
subject
areas.
Architecture is the biggest subject
, changed positively more
than 30% in Change preposition
by more
eight
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an
years
period, Correct your spelling
eight-year
while
the Arts, Business and Medicine increased more
than 20%. Change preposition
by more
For
Science and Humanities have growth in Change preposition
apply
slightly
same range at 10-15%, and have the same Add an article
the slightly
comparation
teacher per student, Correct your spelling
comparison
that is
1:11.
Although
Agriculture and Education experienced a decline number
of academic staffs
, Fix the agreement mistake
staff
but
the Remove the conjunction
apply
comparation
of Correct your spelling
comparison
teacher
per student Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
are
slightly the same with Change the verb form
is
Engineering
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the Engineering
subject
, the lowest additional member among Correct article usage
the others
others
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other subjects
subject
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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