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The table presents information about university-level academic staff in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table presents information about university-level academic staff in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The above table
demonestrates
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demonstrates
 the number of
unversity
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university
 academic
staff
 by area of subject in one country over the year 2005
compare
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compared
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it
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apply
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with 2023.
Overall
, the most significant feature was related to
medicine
feild
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field
. It
is
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showed the strongest rate in both years which
is
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was
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 30664 in 2005 and 36868 in 2013.
Furthermore
,
medicine
receive
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 the highest change score which is 6204.
Its
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 noticeable that the weakest number was with the
argiculture
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agricultural
staff
 which
contribute
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contributed
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 1680 in 2005. The
staff
 number
show
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shows
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steady
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 decrease to
be
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apply
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1633 in 2013 with
minus
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the minus
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 percentage of change -2.80. In
consider
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to
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of
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 the ratio of
techersper
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teachers and
 students in 2013,
Archietecture
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architecture
,
Sciencess
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science
 and humanities exhibited
similar
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a similar
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 ratio with 1:11. The art
staff
 ratio per
students
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student
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contribute
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contributes
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 the highest amount which is 1:12.
In contrast
 ,the
lowerest
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lowest
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proportion
promotion
propotion
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proportion
was relate
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was related
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medicine
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 which is 1:4. The others major was fluactuated in between art and
medicine
.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words staff, medicine with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender distribution
  • academic staff
  • faculties
  • ratios
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • dominance
  • balance
  • disparities
  • hiring practices
  • overview
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