The table presents information about university-level academic staff in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The above table

demonestrates

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demonstrates

the number of

unversity

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university

academic

staff

by area of subject in one country over the year 2005

compare

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compared

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apply

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with 2023.

Overall

, the most significant feature was related to

medicine

feild

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field

. It

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showed the strongest rate in both years which

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30664 in 2005 and 36868 in 2013.

Furthermore

medicine

receive

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the highest change score which is 6204.

Its

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noticeable that the weakest number was with the

argiculture

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agricultural

staff

which

contribute

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1680 in 2005. The

staff

number

show

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steady

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decrease to

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1633 in 2013 with

minus

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percentage of change -2.80. In

consider

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consideration

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the ratio of

techersper

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teachers and

students in 2013,

Archietecture

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architecture

Sciencess

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science

and humanities exhibited

similar

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a similar

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ratio with 1:11. The art

staff

ratio per

students

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student

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contribute

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the highest amount which is 1:12.

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,the

lowerest

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lowest

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proportion

promotion

propotion

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proportion

was relate

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medicine

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to medicine

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which is 1:4. The others major was fluactuated in between art and

medicine

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
28Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

148 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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