The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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proportion

of the

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in four Asian countries

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in urban areas over the 50-year period, commencing 1970.

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, the graph predicts the number of people in

cities

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from 2030 to 2040.

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, there was an upward trend in the percentage of the

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in

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of all

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countries in Asia. It is noticeable that Malaysia witnessed a significant growth over

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period in the

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of

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living in large

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. Meanwhile, the

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living in

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of

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fluctuated slightly, and recovered again in the following years. Looking at the

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proportion

of the range of individuals living in big

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of

Thailand

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and

Indonesia

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.

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the percentage of the

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living in

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in both

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Thailand

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and

Indonesia

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increased

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, reaching at 27% in 2000. There was a slight growth of 2% in the

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proportion

of the collection of people in

Thailand

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in 2020. At the same time, the

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living in

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Indonesia

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grew sharply to roughly 49% in 2020. From 2030 onwards, both

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living in urban areas of

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countries

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will continue to

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and hit the peak in the

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year,

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60% and 40% the

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living in

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of

Indonesia

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and

Thailand

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. Regarding the details, the number of

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in Malaysia reached 30% in 1970, and went up dramatically in the following years, reaching approximately 73% in 2020.

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, the

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proportion

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living in large

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saw a fluctuation during

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period

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it hit the lowest point in 1980, at nearly 33%. In the next 40 years, the

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living in

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of

Philippines

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recovered and reached 43% in 2010.

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that the number of individuals living in

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of Malaysia and

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the Philippines

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will improve and hit the highest point in 2040, at 82% and 49%.