The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The graph
is illustrates
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the development of the town of Stromer over the period 1995 until now.
Overall
,
it is clear that
farmland
was
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is
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diminished now and
represent
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represents
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a small area in the southeast. the park
was
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occupied a large space and now a new airport was constructed. First of all, the large farmland in 1995 was changed to occupy a small area and a new
appartement
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apartment
complex and shops
was
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developed. Next is installed a new house and shops to the east. Following that, in the
west
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west,
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a new restaurant was
building
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built
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and chopped down all
trees
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the trees
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in the
center
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to construct a school for students. Divide the north to the three parts and
removed
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trees to construct a new apartment building and airport to the northeast.
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