This Graphs below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

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numbers

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of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. There is data about the

amount

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of

people

who took part in several activities at a social

center

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centre

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located in Melbourne, Australia between the years 2000 and 2020. These activities include

film

club

, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table tennis and musical performances. In the

year

2000s

film

club

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clubs

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became very popular and

has

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the most participants. The

film

club

reached more than 60

people

. Over the years,

film

clubs have stayed strong because they

maintained

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their

members

from not leaving.

Next,

there is martial arts which is a

self defense

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activity. It started with having more than 30

members

yet having less than 40

people

.

Then

the

year

2005 came and it lost a few

members

but regained its candidates in the

year

2020. With amateur dramatics, it had around 25

people

in the 2000s

however

there were drastic changes to

this

activity when they lost their attendees. In the

year

2020, martial arts had around 10

people

that are still active. The following activity is table tennis, starting off in the

year

2000 table tennis had approximately 16

people

however

they had an unexpected increase

of

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attendees

throughout

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over

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time. In 2020, they had over more than 50

members

.

Last

but not least, there are musical performances with a tragic story because they literally have no subscribers at all.

Nevertheless

, they managed to gain a few new humans to join

this

function. By 2010, they had 10 new humans. And in the

year

2020, they managed to grow their group by having roughly 25 contributors. In the end, the

film

club

is still the winner

by

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having the highest

contributors

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.