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The table shows the proportion of people in England who agree with same-sex marriage from 1989 to 2013.. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the proportion of people in England who agree with same-sex marriage from 1989 to 2013.. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs show the amount of CO2
emissions
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 by each person in four countries, the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal. At first glance,
it is clear that
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 the difference in the number of CO2
emissions
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 decreased steadily from 1967 to 2007.
To begin
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, people who live in the United States emit CO2 much higher than people who live in other countries. It still remained the highest
figure
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 in 2007,
however
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, it was lower than that of 1967.
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The
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 number of Swedish
emissions
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 was almost close to America's
emissions
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, but it dropped by about 7 metric tonnes which was close to the
figure
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 for Italy. The
figure
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 for Italy showed an
overall
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 increase, and it was higher than the
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 for Sweden in 2007. The amount of Portugal people's
emissions
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 kept rising
similarly
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, but it remained almost the same result as Sweden. Swedish reached a peak of their CO2
emissions
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 in 1977, but their amount of CO2
emissions
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 was halved
at the end
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.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words co, emissions, figure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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