The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men amd women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men amd women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men amd women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph below
illustrate
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illustrates

The plural verb illustrate does not appear to agree with the singular subject graph. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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the
compasernce
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comparison

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of education
qualification
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qualifications

It seems that qualification may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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in Austria and
proportion
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the proportion

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of
female
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females

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and
male
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males

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who
viseted
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visited

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school
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the school

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during
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in

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1999. The gives information about four
section
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sections

The singular noun section follows a number other than one. Consider changing the noun to the plural form.

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such
Linking Words

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as
:
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apply

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Master
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Master's

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Degree
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, Postgraduate
Diploma
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, Bachelor's
Degree
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

, Undergraduate
Degree
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

,
Skilled
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and Skilled

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Vocationalk
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Vocational

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Diploma
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. The dramatical difference in
Skilled
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the Skilled

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Vocationak
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Vocational

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diploma
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which
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apply

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is contain
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contains

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over four-fifth
for
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of

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male
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males

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and only one in ten
for
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apply

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female
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females

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. The slightly same proportions in the Bachelor's
Degree
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that maintain half of
man
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men

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and just under women. The unexpected provided information in Undergraduate
Diploma
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, where
female
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females

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are in significant majority seven in them and
male
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males

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almost more than
two-fifth
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two-fifths

The word two-fifth doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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. The Post Graduate Program and
Master
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Master's

It seems that this noun form may be incorrect.

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Use synonyms
Fix the agreement mistake
Degrees
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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Degree
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Degree are
Degree were

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slighty
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slightly

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the same
nealry
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nearly

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less than a third and two fifth for
female
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females

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and seven in ten
three-fifth
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three-fifths

The word three-fifth doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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for
male
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males

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. The
last
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criteria
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criterion

It seems that criteria may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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for women
is
Unnecessary verb
apply

The verb is appears to be unnecessary here.

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rose
for
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by

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a half and for men
fall
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fell

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb fall. Consider changing it.

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for
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by

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a
Correct article usage
apply

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more than two fifth. The proportions for
provided
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the provided

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chart
descrabes
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describe

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where the
male
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males

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got a very large majority and women a significant proportions.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words degree, diploma with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • levels
  • post-school qualifications
  • proportion
  • men
  • women
  • held
  • clear gender disparity
  • Certificate I
  • Certificate II
  • Certificate III
  • Certificate IV
  • Diploma or Higher
  • highest proportion
  • decreases
  • overall
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