The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity si used ni an average English home. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart illustrates the average power consumed in a 24-hour period during winter and summer in England. The pie chart displays the various purposes for which

this

electricity is utilized.

Overall

, the power

consumption

in winter is significantly higher than that required in summer for each hour of the

day

. The highest share of the total electricity is needed to heat up rooms and water. During winters, a typical

day

starts with a demand of around 35,000

units

fluctuating between the levels of 30,000 and 40,000

units

till 8 in the morning, until it starts to sharply

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reaching its peak

consumption

of nearly 45,000 at around 9

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night.

This

demand gradually falls to approximately 35,000

units

as the

day

comes to an end. Contrarily, in summers, the initial 9 hours experience a drop in

consumption

starting the

day

with approximately 18,000

units

, increasing steadily to just over 20,000 around 1 in the afternoon. The

consumption

stays stable for the rest of the

day

at nearly 18000

units

. Nearly half of the

overall

consumption

can be attributed to heating rooms and water. The second largest

consumption

of nearly

one fifth

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is

due to

appliances like ovens, kettles, and washing machines. The least amount of power, at 15% each, is used for tools like lighting, TV, radio,

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vacuum

cleaners, food mixers, and electric appliances.