The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity si used ni an average English home. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the average power consumed in a 24-hour period during winter and summer in England. The pie chart displays the various purposes for which
this
electricity is utilized.
Overall
, the power consumption
in winter is significantly higher than that required in summer for each hour of the day
. The highest share of the total electricity is needed to heat up rooms and water.
During winters, a typical day
starts with a demand of around 35,000 units
fluctuating between the levels of 30,000 and 40,000 units
till 8 in the morning, until it starts to sharply rise
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consumption
of nearly 45,000 at around 9 in
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This
demand gradually falls to approximately 35,000 units
as the day
comes to an end. Contrarily, in summers, the initial 9 hours experience a drop in consumption
starting the day
with approximately 18,000 units
, increasing steadily to just over 20,000 around 1 in the afternoon. The consumption
stays stable for the rest of the day
at nearly 18000 units
.
Nearly half of the overall
consumption
can be attributed to heating rooms and water. The second largest consumption
of nearly one fifth
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one-fifth
due to
appliances like ovens, kettles, and washing machines. The least amount of power, at 15% each, is used for tools like lighting, TV, radio, vaccum
cleaners, food mixers, and electric appliances.Correct your spelling
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