The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The above table chart reveals data on the proportion of
population
and dedicating the Global wealth
of 8 different areas.
The most significant feature is the highest population
number
was related to China while
the lowest number
was at
Rich Asia-Pacefic. Change preposition
in
Moreover
, North America received the strongest percentage of wealth
and the weakest was referred to India and Africa.
It is noticeable that North America shows a huge difference in percentage which is 33 on Global wealth
and 5 on population
. Similarly
, The number
of wealth
in Europe had a high score of 30 then
sharply declined in the population
to 15. It's evident, that the Rich Asia-Pacefic exhibited a similar pattern as Europe and North America which is 25 on wealth
and 5 on population
.
In contrast
, China had approximately 25 in population
then
show dramatically decrease in wealth
number
to 3. However
, India, Africa and other Asia had strong scores on population
from 15, 15, 10
Correct word choice
and 10
then
tend
to Wrong verb form
tended
dropped
on Change the verb
drop
wealth
to 3,4,3.In addition
, Latin Americans illustrate a low percentage in both categories with 7 on population
and 4 on wealth
.Submitted by rahafalkhashti7 on
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