The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The above table chart reveals data on the proportion of
population
and dedicating the Global
wealth
of 8 different areas. The most significant feature is the highest
population
number
was related to China
while
the lowest
number
was
at
Change preposition
in
show examples
Rich Asia-Pacefic.
Moreover
, North America received the strongest percentage of
wealth
and the weakest was referred to India and Africa. It is noticeable that North America shows a huge difference in percentage which is 33 on Global
wealth
and 5 on
population
.
Similarly
, The
number
of
wealth
in Europe had a high score of 30
then
sharply declined in the
population
to 15. It's evident, that the Rich Asia-Pacefic exhibited a similar pattern as Europe and North America which is 25 on
wealth
and 5 on
population
.
In contrast
, China had approximately 25 in
population
then
show dramatically decrease in
wealth
number
to 3.
However
, India, Africa and other Asia had strong scores on
population
from 15, 15,
10
Correct word choice
and 10
show examples
then
tend
Wrong verb form
tended
show examples
to
dropped
Change the verb
drop
show examples
on
wealth
to 3,4,3.
In addition
, Latin Americans illustrate a low percentage in both categories with 7 on
population
and 4 on
wealth
.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, wealth, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • global population
  • distribution of wealth
  • percentages
  • region
  • Asia
  • Africa
  • Europe
  • North America
  • South America
  • Oceania
  • disparity
  • account for
  • follow
  • despite
  • vary
  • demonstrate
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