The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The above table chart reveals data on the proportion of
population
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and dedicating the Global
wealth
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of 8 different areas. The most significant feature is the highest
population
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number
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was related to China
while
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the lowest
number
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was
at
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in
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Rich Asia-Pacefic.
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, North America received the strongest percentage of
wealth
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and the weakest was referred to India and Africa. It is noticeable that North America shows a huge difference in percentage which is 33 on Global
wealth
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and 5 on
population
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.
Similarly
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, The
number
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of
wealth
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in Europe had a high score of 30
then
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sharply declined in the
population
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to 15. It's evident, that the Rich Asia-Pacefic exhibited a similar pattern as Europe and North America which is 25 on
wealth
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and 5 on
population
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.
In contrast
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, China had approximately 25 in
population
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then
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show dramatically decrease in
wealth
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number
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to 3.
However
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, India, Africa and other Asia had strong scores on
population
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from 15, 15,
10
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and 10
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then
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tend
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tended
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to
dropped
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drop
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on
wealth
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to 3,4,3.
In addition
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, Latin Americans illustrate a low percentage in both categories with 7 on
population
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and 4 on
wealth
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, wealth, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • global population
  • distribution of wealth
  • percentages
  • region
  • Asia
  • Africa
  • Europe
  • North America
  • South America
  • Oceania
  • disparity
  • account for
  • follow
  • despite
  • vary
  • demonstrate
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