he maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.

he maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.
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The provided maps illustrate the
overall
expansion of a village called
Meadowside
and
Fonton
town over three time periods:1962, 1985 and the present day.
Overall
, both areas experienced significant growth.
Moreover
, by the end of the period,
Meadowside
had been taken by the
Fonton
and had become a suburban area of
this
city. In 1962, the towns were completely separated from each other.
Meadowside
had a road running through it from the southwest to the northeast,
while
Fonton
had a rail line passing throughout the town. By 1985 both towns had notably expanded. Not only did a superstore but
also
a leisure complex appear in
Meadowside
. Despite these changes, two towns were joined by road, running through the
center
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of
Meadowside
. Nowadays, it has agglomerated and become a common territory. A business park has been established,
while
on the opposite side of the road, a station and new hotel were built. It was the railway that connected the station and
Fonton
city
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