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he maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.

he maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.
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The provided maps illustrate the
overall
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 expansion of a village called
Meadowside
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 and
Fonton
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 town over three time periods:1962, 1985 and the present day.
Overall
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, both areas experienced significant growth.
Moreover
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, by the end of the period,
Meadowside
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 had been taken by the
Fonton
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 and had become a suburban area of
this
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 city. In 1962, the towns were completely separated from each other.
Meadowside
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 had a road running through it from the southwest to the northeast,
while
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Fonton
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 had a rail line passing throughout the town. By 1985 both towns had notably expanded. Not only did a superstore but
also
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 a leisure complex appear in
Meadowside
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. Despite these changes, two towns were joined by road, running through the
center
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 of
Meadowside
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. Nowadays, it has agglomerated and become a common territory. A business park has been established,
while
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 on the opposite side of the road, a station and new hotel were built. It was the railway that connected the station and
Fonton
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city
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City
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meadowside, fonton with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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