he maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.
The provided maps illustrate the
overall
expansion of a village called Meadowside
and Fonton
town over three time periods:1962, 1985 and the present day.
Overall
, both areas experienced significant growth. Moreover
, by the end of the period, Meadowside
had been taken by the Fonton
and had become a suburban area of this
city.
In 1962, the towns were completely separated from each other. Meadowside
had a road running through it from the southwest to the northeast, while
Fonton
had a rail line passing throughout the town.
By 1985 both towns had notably expanded. Not only did a superstore but also
a leisure complex appear in Meadowside
. Despite these changes, two towns were joined by road, running through the center
of Change the spelling
centre
Meadowside
.
Nowadays, it has agglomerated and become a common territory. A business park has been established, while
on the opposite side of the road, a station and new hotel were built. It was the railway that connected the station and Fonton
city
.Capitalize word
City
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