The chart illustrates the expenditure on several types of junk food in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
Overall
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Hamburgers
and Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
increased dramatically over the period. Use synonyms
By contrast
, pizza decreased slightly. At the beginning of Linking Words
this
period, pizza was the most common junk food. Linking Words
While
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the
Correct article usage
apply
hamburgers
Use synonyms
are
Unnecessary verb
apply
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
Use synonyms
become
popular Wrong verb form
became
at the end
of the period.
it is clear from Linking Words
this
line graph, Linking Words
Use synonyms
hamburgers
and Correct word choice
that hamburgers
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
had maintained around 100 from 1970 to 1980, Use synonyms
hamburgers
skyrocketed slowly from under 100 and settled Use synonyms
nearly
100 in both 1980 Change preposition
at nearly
an
1985 years Correct your spelling
and
then
to 300 in 1990. Linking Words
Similarly
, Linking Words
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
rose significantly and reached its peak at 500 in 1990.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, pizza dropped gradually until 1980 and it had maintained Linking Words
approximately
200.Change preposition
at approximately
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