The line graph below shows the consumption of 3 different types of fast food in Britain from 1970 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the expenditure on several types of junk food in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
Overall
,Hamburgers
and fish
and chips
increased dramatically over the period. By contrast
, pizza decreased slightly. At the beginning of this
period, pizza was the most common junk food. While
the
Correct article usage
apply
hamburgers
are
Unnecessary verb
apply
fish
and chips
become
popular Wrong verb form
became
at the end
of the period.
it is clear from this
line graph, hamburgers
and Correct word choice
that hamburgers
fish
and chips
had maintained around 100 from 1970 to 1980, hamburgers
skyrocketed slowly from under 100 and settled nearly
100 in both 1980 Change preposition
at nearly
an
1985 years Correct your spelling
and
then
to 300 in 1990. Similarly
, fish
and chips
rose significantly and reached its peak at 500 in 1990.
On the other hand
, pizza dropped gradually until 1980 and it had maintained approximately
200.Change preposition
at approximately
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hamburgers, fish, chips with synonyms.
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