The line graph below shows the consumption of 3 different types of fast food in Britain from 1970 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the consumption of 3 different types of fast food in Britain from 1970 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the expenditure on several types of junk food in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
Overall
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,
Hamburgers
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and
fish
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and
chips
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increased dramatically over the period.
By contrast
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, pizza decreased slightly. At the beginning of
this
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period, pizza was the most common junk food.
While
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the
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apply
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hamburgers
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are
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apply
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fish
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and
chips
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become
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became
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popular
at the end
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of the period. it is clear from
this
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line graph,
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hamburgers
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that hamburgers
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and
fish
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and
chips
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had maintained around 100 from 1970 to 1980,
hamburgers
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skyrocketed slowly from under 100 and settled
nearly
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at nearly
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100 in both 1980
an
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and
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1985 years
then
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to 300 in 1990.
Similarly
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,
fish
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and
chips
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rose significantly and reached its peak at 500 in 1990.
On the other hand
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, pizza dropped gradually until 1980 and it had maintained
approximately
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at approximately
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200.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hamburgers, fish, chips with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fast food
  • Britain
  • decade
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
  • significant
  • milestones
  • sharp
  • popularity
  • patterns
  • preferences
  • correlations
  • observations
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