Writing Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The following
graph
demonstrates the production
levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK and the time period is- between 1981 and 2000.
In the graph
, the production
level of petroleum gets a huge hike from the year 1981 to 1984 and then
it gets parallel till 1986. Then
, the production
is reduced from 140 to 120 energy units by 1990. It took two years to get a boost in the production
of petroleum and from then
till the end, the production
level was in an optimum condition.
On the other hand
, the
coal Correct article usage
apply
production
remained almost the same from 1981 to 1983 and then
a massive decline occurred and continued till 1984 when the production
came down below the
40 energy Correct article usage
apply
unit
. Fix the agreement mistake
units
Then
the production
graph
got uplifted and continued till 1986.
Meanwhile, the production
condition of the natural gas faced a very smooth journey in the graph
. The production
quantity remained almost the same till 1990 and then
, there was a promotion in the case of the production
level of natural gas and it reached its'
peak in the year 1999.Correct your spelling
its
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