The table below shows employment patterns for males and females in New Zealand in 1993 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows employment patterns for males and females in New Zealand in

 1993 and 2003.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.
The supplied table indicates employment
various
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parts for men and women in New
Zealand
over a ten-year period. A glance at the graph reveals that the highest
percentage
of employment patterns is for difficulties in finding skilled
workers
in New
Zealand
.
However
, employees who were technical and managerial did not have many problems
to find
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finding
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a job over the period. In 2004, the
percentage
of issues for finding skilled
workers
for manufacturing was just over
a
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half (51%), (which was the highest number of problems over the whole year) just ahead of building and services at 45% in New
Zealand
in 2004.
Moreover
, roughly a third of difficulties in finding unskilled
workers
was for manufacturing (28%), compared to 2003 which accounted for 26% in New
Zealand
.
In contrast
, the
percentage
of difficulties in finding technical and managerial
workers
for commerce in New
Zealand
in 2004 was a bit as few as
2003
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in 2003
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at 0% and 2%, respectively. (Which were the lowest
percentage
of problems over the whole year).
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