The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph shows the amount of one
country
exports in different Change noun form
country's
products
during 2015 and 2016. It is clear from the graph that the value of petroleum prouducts
continuously dominated in both years compared with other Correct your spelling
products
products
.While
the equivalent figure for trextails catogaries
ranked the lowest during the period shown. The petroleum Correct your spelling
categories
products
was 60 billions
in 2015 which increased a little by 65 Change to singular
billion
billions
in 2016 .Change to singular
billion
However
, the engineered materials was
below 60 Change the verb form
were
billions
approximately which nearly jumped to 62 Change to singular
billion
billions
in 2016.Change to singular
billion
On the other hand
, the export amount of jewellery products
rose to above 40 billions
in 2015 and decreased to 40 Change to singular
billion
billions
in 2016 .Change to singular
billion
Also
the number of agricultural products
export
had the same value Wrong verb form
exported
in
throughout the period time . The export of Change preposition
apply
textile
declined Fix the agreement mistake
textiles
less
than 30 Change preposition
to less
billions
in 2015 Change to singular
billion
then
grew to 35 billions
in the following year .Change to singular
billion
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