The line graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates how many
participants
for 6 different activity
at a particular social centre in Melbourne, Australia are engaged from 2000 to 2020.
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activities
Overall
, although
the number
of participants
in amateur dramatics decreased, that of the other five activities either increased or fluctuated during the period.
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film club Remove the preposition
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participants
, it kept its position at the top of the list and fluctuated around
60 to just under 70 Change preposition
from around
people
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over at
at
determined period of time. Correct your spelling
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Similarly
, material art experienced the same trend and its fluctuation raged from about 30 to almost 40 participants
.
At the beginning of the period, there was
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were
to
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participants
in musical performances, however
, from 2005 till 2020, its attendants
rose from 0 to about 17, which of the initial Fix the agreement mistake
attendance
number
of people
attending in
table tennis. Change preposition
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This
activity’s participants
approximately stayed the same till 2010, then
surged and reached at
the triple amount of its initial. Remove the preposition
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In contrast
, the number
of people
in amateur dramatics, after a slight rise in 2005, dramatically decreased and reached to
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one fifth
of its Add a hyphen
one-fifth
number
at the begging
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beginning
to
around 5 Change preposition
of
people
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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