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The line graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates how many
participants
 for 6 different
activity
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activities
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 at a particular social centre in Melbourne, Australia are engaged from 2000 to 2020.
Overall
,
although
 the
number
 of
participants
 in amateur dramatics decreased, that of the other five activities either increased or fluctuated during the period. Regarding
to
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film club
participants
, it kept its position at the top of the list and fluctuated
around
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from around
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 60 to just under 70
people
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over at
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at
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a
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 determined period of time.
Similarly
, material art experienced the same trend and its fluctuation raged from about 30 to almost 40
participants
. At the beginning of the period, there
was
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were
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 no
to
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participants
 in musical performances,
however
, from 2005 till 2020, its
attendants
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attendance
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 rose from 0 to about 17, which of the initial
number
 of
people
 attending
in
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table tennis.
This
 activity’s
participants
 approximately stayed the same till 2010,
then
 surged and reached
at
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the triple amount of its initial.
In contrast
, the
number
 of
people
 in amateur dramatics, after a slight rise in 2005, dramatically decreased and reached
to
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one fifth
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 of its
number
 at the
begging
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beginning
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to
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of
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 around 5
people
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words participants, number, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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