You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive. Write a letter to the post manager. In your letter. Give details of the situation Describe the documents Say what action you want the post office to take.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my disappointment with the service of Linking Words
Use synonyms
post
office.
My name is Sim and I am living in Brampton Add an article
the post
a post
city
. I have a full-time job at Capitalize word
City
optometrist
. Add an article
the optometrist
an optometrist
Last
month, I signed my insurance Linking Words
papers
which I got from my employer and I was supposed to sign them after that I had to send them back. Use synonyms
Last
week, I Linking Words
Use synonyms
post
those documents from the Wrong verb form
posted
post
office which is on Use synonyms
toberman
and Correct your spelling
Tubman
dery road
. After, four days I got Correct your spelling
Dery Road
email
from my manager that he didn't Add an article
an email
got
my insurance Change the verb form
get
papers
back yet. I tried to call on that Use synonyms
post
office address but no one answered the call. My manager is still waiting for the Use synonyms
papers
because they have to Use synonyms
sumbit
them so that my insurance can start as soon as possible. I request you to find out the reason behind Correct your spelling
submit
this
and it will be a great help if you will find the Linking Words
papers
.
Hope to hear back soon
Yours faithfully
SimUse synonyms
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task achievement
Ensure all relevant details are clearly stated, such as the exact date of sending the documents and more specific information about the documents.
coherence cohesion
Try to link your sentences and ideas more smoothly to improve the overall flow of your letter.
coherence cohesion
Use paragraphs more effectively to separate different parts of your message, such as detailing the problem, explaining the importance of the documents, and stating your request.
task achievement
The letter is polite and maintains a suitable tone throughout, which is important for formal correspondence.
coherence cohesion
The letter includes a clear closing, which contributes to a more complete message.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.