The pie chart below show percentages of water used in different sectors in Sydney,Australia in 1997 and 2007. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and makecomparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart compares
water
spending in different sectors in Australia,more specifically in Sydney between 1997 and 2007.
Overall
,it is clear that
citizens in Sydney spent most of the water
in the Food industry
in both years. Additionally
,water
used to build industry
less than others by people in 10 years.
People in Sydney spent 48% of total water
in 1997,while
in 2007 this
number decreased to 41%. Although
the service industry
was one of the least used water
sectors in 1997,it used just 13%, in 2007 this
percentage increased to 25%. Moreover
, 15% of the water
was used for manufacturing in the first year. however
, 11% of water
was wasted by Manufacturing in 2007. Furthermore
, Household use was just 19% and after 10 years this
number fell to 21%. Another interesting thing is that the Building industry
had the littlest part in all periods. It had
5% in 1997 and Verb problem
was
this
number fell to 2% in 2007.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, industry with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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