The pie chart below show percentages of water used in different sectors in Sydney,Australia in 1997 and 2007. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and makecomparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below show percentages of water used in different sectors in Sydney,Australia in 1997 and 2007.

Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and makecomparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart compares information about using
water
in five sectors,mainly Food,Service and Building industries,Household and Manufacturing in Australia,more specifically in Sydney between 1997 and 2007.
Overall
,
it is clear that
people used more
water
in the Food
industry
than others in both years.
Furthermore
,the Building
industry
had the smallest part in the all periods. Australian people used 48% of
water
in the Food
industry
in 1997.
While
after ten years
this
percentage decreased to 41%.
Additionally
, the sphere of building wasted 5% of
water
in 1997,
however
,
this
percentage fell to 2% in 2007. 13% of
water
was spent by the Service
Industry
at the start of the period.
This
sector's numbers jumped almost twice,to 25% in 2007.
Moreover
,if Household use was 19% in 1997,
this
number increased to 21% in 2007. Another interesting thing is that Manufacturing needed 15% of
water
in 1997,and after ten years
this
percentage fell to 11%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, industry with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • sector
  • domestic use
  • industrial use
  • agricultural use
  • compare
  • contrast
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • remained constant
  • notable shift
  • discernible pattern
  • total usage
  • distribution
  • data
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