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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 map
illustrate
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illustrates
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 the changes that occurred in a village
that is
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 not far away from London, called Chorleywood,
throughout
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from
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 the
year
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years
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 1868 to 1994,
this
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 area
have
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has
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 encountered a steady growth in population since around 1950.
Overall
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, in terms of land area, the village got bigger
dramaticly
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dramatically
 over time, mainly in the
last
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 shown period which is 1970 to 1994.
Getting into
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Into
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 more details, a motorway was built in 1970,
it is
Verb problem
apply
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going through the right side of the map,
Moreover
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, a Railway
also
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 was established in 1909, which
is serving
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serves
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the
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apply
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most of the village.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population growth
  • geographical features
  • 19th century
  • construction
  • public buildings
  • railways
  • infrastructure
  • economic activities
  • housing developments
  • commercial zones
  • environmental concerns
  • deforestation
  • traffic
  • urban sprawl
  • notable architecture
  • landmarks
  • urbanization
  • expansion
  • modernization
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