Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
map illustrate
the changes that occurred in a village Change the verb form
illustrates
that is
not far away from London, called Chorleywood, throughout
the Change preposition
from
year
1868 to 1994, Fix the agreement mistake
years
this
area have
encountered a steady growth in population since around 1950.
Change the verb form
has
Overall
, in terms of land area, the village got bigger dramaticly
over time, mainly in the Correct your spelling
dramatically
last
shown period which is 1970 to 1994.
Getting into
more details, a motorway was built in 1970, Verb problem
Into
it is
going through the right side of the map, Verb problem
apply
Moreover
, a Railway also
was established in 1909, which is serving
Wrong verb form
serves
the
most of the village.Correct article usage
apply
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