The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the earned money of one country's
export
in five different categories from 2015 to 2016. The table represents the Fix the agreement mistake
exports
porportion
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proportion
if
value change between 2015 to 2016. Correct your spelling
of
Overall
, the highest changed
and earned export was Replace the word
change
textiles
but about
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apply
gems
and jewelry
dropped slightly Change the spelling
jewellery
while
,
engineered goods increased gradually. Remove the comma
apply
However
, in table displays the value of textiles
dramatically increased . In contrast
, gems
and jewelry
values decreased.
In terms of time , Change the spelling
jewellery
textiles
earned money increased by 7 billion
dollars in 2016 but on the contrary
gems
and jewelry
collected money went down Change the spelling
jewellery
in
43 Change preposition
from
billion
to 41 billion
dollars. The first two petroleum products
and engineered goods were increased by approximately 1 billion
and 3 billion
respectively. However
, agricultural products
was remained
relatively unchanged Change to the active voice
remained
in
32 Change preposition
at
billion
dollars in
2015 to 2016.
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from
On the other hand
, the percentage of textiles
value went up dramatically 15.24
percent and Change preposition
by 15.24
second
highest changed product was engineered goods increased Correct article usage
the second
8.5
%. Petroleum Change preposition
by 8.5
products
stock increased by 3% whereas
, agricultural products
rosen
slightly Correct your spelling
rose
0.81
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by 0.81
percent
in 2016. Change the spelling
per cent
In contrast
, gems
and jewelry
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jewellery
price
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prices
was
declined suddenly Unnecessary verb
apply
5.18
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by 5.18
percent
in the year 2016.Change the spelling
per cent
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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