The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. IELTS Diagram

The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

 Write at least 150 words.

IELTS Diagram
The pie graph illustrates the rate of 2019 graduates from the University of Brighton and their index of employment.
Overall
, there are ten different fields and the priority of people goes to service industries.
While
the least humans choose a sport and charity. As seen in the diagram, the service industries are chosen by most people and the second best result is industry too, but manufacturing, with almost one-third and 16.3%, respectively. The two types of jobs have almost the same proportions. They are education and politics&government with nearly 12.1% and 14.7%, respectively. As shown in the pie chart, other employment sectors are not as popular as the first four.
For example
, the next one is transportation and warehousing.
This
sector is chosen by approximately 7.8% of graduates. Modern works,
such
as science & technology don't have good results like others,
although
has nearly 7.3%. 5.6% of past students choose civil service, meanwhile, sport and charity have 0.1% and 0.3%, cooperatively. Other works which are unknown were chosen by 2.8% of people.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Proportions
  • Graduates
  • Employment sectors
  • Distribution
  • Industry
  • Attracted
  • Significant trends
  • Comparisons
  • Popular
  • Moderate level of interest
  • Observations
  • Implications
  • Economic factors
  • Future trends
  • Illustrates
  • Majority
  • Elaborated
  • Moderate
  • Summarized
  • Potential implications
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