The graph below shows the average consumption of cheese per person in England, Scotland,Wales and Northern Ireland between 1980 and 2020.
The graph illustrates the
amount
of cheese on average Use synonyms
consumption
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on
British (England, Change preposition
by
Scotland
, Use synonyms
Wales
and Use synonyms
Northem
Ireland ) between 1980 and 2020.
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North
Overall
, England accounted for the most Linking Words
consumption
at the beginning and the end of the years between 1980 and 2020 and saw an Use synonyms
overall
decrease. Linking Words
Consumption
in Use synonyms
Scotland
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also
shows a decline from 1980 to 2020 Linking Words
whereas
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Wales
and Northern both increased.
Cheese Use synonyms
consumption
in England began at about 110 kilograms in 1980 and declined steadily throughout Use synonyms
the
time shown to the end at nearly 85 KG. Meanwhile, the Correct article usage
apply
amount
of that in Use synonyms
Scotland
saw an initial rise from 1980 to 1990. Use synonyms
However
, from that point to the end of the period, it dropped to finish the period at less than 60 KG in 2020 and became the least Linking Words
amount
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among
the UK.
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in
Although
the Linking Words
amount
of cheese Use synonyms
consumption
in Use synonyms
Wales
and Northern Ireland Use synonyms
were
the lowest Change the verb form
was
Linking Words
while
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apply
Wales
had about Use synonyms
20KG
more than Northern Ireland, at nearly 15 kilograms. Both of them increased steadily over the whole period from 1980 to 2020, and Correct your spelling
20 kg
they
their Correct pronoun usage
apply
amount
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exceed
that of Wrong verb form
exceeded
Scotland
successively in 2002 and 2018.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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