The bar chart shows the percentages of the Canadian workforce in five major industries in 1850 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart depicts the proportion of Canadian work
labors
in five different sectors between 1850 and 2020.
Replace the word
labourers
Overall
, it is evident that the percentage of employees in services and construction fields showed an upward shift, whereas
the remaining sectors, manufacturing, agriculture/fishing, and energy/water, experienced a downward trend during the years.
In 1850, manufacturing workers contributed to 36% of total
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the total
workforces
, making it the dominant sector among others. It Fix the agreement mistake
workforce
then
plummeted to only 9% by 2020. Following
this
, in 1850, service
field had a similar amount of workers, amounting Correct article usage
the service
for
33%, before surging to 81% by 2020.
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On the other hand
, the percentage of Correct article usage
the workforces
workforces
in the agriculture/fishing sector was 22% in 1850 and it dramatically fell to only 1% by 2020. The employees in Fix the agreement mistake
workforce
the
construction contributed to 5%, before slightly rising to 8% by 2020. Correct article usage
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Energy
/water sector showed the Correct article usage
The energy
least
rate of workers which was only 3% in 1850 and Correct word choice
lowest
this
figure decreased to the bottom position with only 1%, similar to the agriculture/fishing field.Submitted by chocolate10
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