Task 1: The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Task 1: The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
rate
of joblessness in three countries
uk
, japan and the rest of
Europe
between 1993 and 2007. In 1993, the
unemployment
rate
in the
Europe
and
uk
was about 9% and 11% respectively.The
rate
in
Europe
surged gradually until 1997,
then
decreased to almost 8% in 2007.In the meantime, the percentage of
unemployment
rates in the
UK
sharply declined to 5% in 2001
then
remained steady until 2005
then
rose slowly to 2007. Both
uk
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UK
and
Europe
depicted
the
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descending shift. In 1993, the
unemployment
rate
in Japan grew slightly till 1995, it was unchangeable,
however
, it dramatically increased to 6% in 2003.
while
it quickly went down to 4% in 2007.
furthermore
,
uk
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UK
unemployment
rate
was the lowest
at the end
of the period .
Overall
, The
unemployment
rate
in Japan showed an upward trend whilst the percentage of unemployed rates in
UK
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the UK
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and
Europe
experienced a downward trend.
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