The table presents how much people from five employment sectors earned, in three different salary levels in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table gives data on the maximum, minimum and average
salaries
earned by people working in 5 different employment sectors, namely finance, transportation, construction, manufacturing as well as
hospitality in 2009.
Overall
, the lowest wages were observed in the hospitality sector
, except the minimum wage which the lower in the construction sector
, while
the maximum was represented by the finance sector
in all 3 levels.
To start, the minimum, maximum and average salaries
in the hospitality and and construction sectors were equal to 890, 2900,1895 and 790, 3100 and 1945 pounds
respectively. Obviously, these were the lowest positions. Additionally
, although
the minimum wage was higher in the manufacturing sector
rather than in the transportation sector
, being equal to 930 pounds
, its maximum and average salaries
which constituted 3500 and 2215 pounds
respectively, could not surpass the transportation where numbers made up 843 pounds
for minimum, 4580 for maximum and 2712 pounds
for average.
However
, in contrast
with other sectors, the finance sector
had the highest position in all 3 levels of salaries
in the United Kingdom, owing to its indicators comprising 1600 pounds
for the minimum wage, 5225 pounds
for the average and 8850 pounds
for the maximum.Submitted by i.nureddinn on
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