The table presents how much people from five employment sectors earned, in three different salary levels in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table gives data on the maximum, minimum and average
salaries
earned by people working in 5 different employment sectors, namely finance, transportation, construction, manufacturing Use synonyms
as well as
hospitality in 2009.
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Overall
, the lowest wages were observed in the hospitality Linking Words
sector
, except the minimum wage which the lower in the construction Use synonyms
sector
, Use synonyms
while
the maximum was represented by the finance Linking Words
sector
in all 3 levels.
To start, the minimum, maximum and average Use synonyms
salaries
in the hospitality and and construction sectors were equal to 890, 2900,1895 and 790, 3100 and 1945 Use synonyms
pounds
respectively. Obviously, these were the lowest positions. Use synonyms
Additionally
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although
the minimum wage was higher in the manufacturing Linking Words
sector
rather than in the transportation Use synonyms
sector
, being equal to 930 Use synonyms
pounds
, its maximum and average Use synonyms
salaries
which constituted 3500 and 2215 Use synonyms
pounds
respectively, could not surpass the transportation where numbers made up 843 Use synonyms
pounds
for minimum, 4580 for maximum and 2712 Use synonyms
pounds
for average.
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However
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in contrast
with other sectors, the finance Linking Words
sector
had the highest position in all 3 levels of Use synonyms
salaries
in the United Kingdom, owing to its indicators comprising 1600 Use synonyms
pounds
for the minimum wage, 5225 Use synonyms
pounds
for the average and 8850 Use synonyms
pounds
for the maximum.Use synonyms
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