The table presents how much people from five employment sectors earned, in three different salary levels in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table presents how much people from five employment sectors earned, in three different salary levels in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table gives data on the maximum, minimum and average
salaries
earned by people working in 5 different employment sectors, namely finance, transportation, construction, manufacturing
as well as
hospitality in 2009.
Overall
, the lowest wages were observed in the hospitality
sector
, except the minimum wage which the lower in the construction
sector
,
while
the maximum was represented by the finance
sector
in all 3 levels. To start, the minimum, maximum and average
salaries
in the hospitality and and construction sectors were equal to 890, 2900,1895 and 790, 3100 and 1945
pounds
respectively. Obviously, these were the lowest positions.
Additionally
,
although
the minimum wage was higher in the manufacturing
sector
rather than in the transportation
sector
, being equal to 930
pounds
, its maximum and average
salaries
which constituted 3500 and 2215
pounds
respectively, could not surpass the transportation where numbers made up 843
pounds
for minimum, 4580 for maximum and 2712
pounds
for average.
However
,
in contrast
with other sectors, the finance
sector
had the highest position in all 3 levels of
salaries
in the United Kingdom, owing to its indicators comprising 1600
pounds
for the minimum wage, 5225
pounds
for the average and 8850
pounds
for the maximum.
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