The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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information about the economic situation in

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Brazil. There are five different

manufacturings

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manufacturers

that provide

economy

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the economy

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of

country

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the country

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in 2009, 2019 and 2029.

Overall

, in all 3

years

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years,

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the

finance

field has the best rates

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comparison with others. All industries have

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a trend

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of decrease excluding

of

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apply

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finance

and oil, coal and gas. As seen in the diagram,

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the period

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between 2009 and 2019

finance

had increased from 30% to almost 35%.

Also

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food processing and oil, coal and gas had

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to approximately 20% and 30%. Their rates were 10% and 25%, respectively.

However

, manufacturing and tourism had decreased by 5%

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, to nearly 15% and 20%, respectively. As shown in the graph, food processing and oil, coal and gas will have the same situation. They will

fallen

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down to the same proportion as in 2009.

Tourism

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The tourism

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index won't even improve or decrease.

Finance

will increase to approximately 40%,

while

manufacturing will decrease to 5%.