The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration
provide
information about the economic situation in Change the verb form
provides
the
Brazil. There are five different Correct article usage
apply
manufacturings
that provide Correct your spelling
manufacturers
economy
of Correct article usage
the economy
country
in 2009, 2019 and 2029.
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the country
a country
Overall
, in all 3 years
the Add a comma
years,
finance
field has the best rates on
comparison with others. All industries have Change preposition
in
trend
of decrease excluding Add an article
a trend
the trend
of
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finance
and oil, coal and gas.
As seen in the diagram, period
between 2009 and 2019 Add an article
the period
finance
had increased from 30% to almost 35%.Also
food processing and oil, coal and gas had Add a comma
Also,
rose
to approximately 20% and 30%. Their rates were 10% and 25%, respectively. Change the verb form
risen
However
, manufacturing and tourism had decreased by 5% both
, to nearly 15% and 20%, respectively.
As shown in the graph, food processing and oil, coal and gas will have the same situation. They will Correct pronoun usage
apply
fallen
down to the same proportion as in 2009. Change the verb form
fall
Tourism
index won't even improve or decrease. Correct article usage
The tourism
Finance
will increase to approximately 40%, while
manufacturing will decrease to 5%.Submitted by bizhanalikhan6 on
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