Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map introduces the expansion and development of the village as people constantly move in for different periods. In overview, when the first immigrants built a small village in 1868,
this
area started to develop, and the housing,
as well as
the road, has aggressively expanded through the land for the past century. In the beginning, two main roads were built so as to connect other towns.
Next,
the second phase of immigration came to the village during 1883-1922
while
the railway was constructed in 1909. It is worth noting that the major population was centred around the train station.
Then
, for the next stage,
that is
1922-1970, the number of people remained climbed up, and
thus
the residential area continuously stretched outward.
Moreover
, the motorway was built parallel to one main road, and the motorway's one end crossed another main road, and the other end traversed through the railway.
Finally
, in the
last
stage from 1970 to 1994, the majority of people migrated and gathered in the vicinity of the motorway. It was more convenient for the transport.
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  • population growth
  • geographical features
  • 19th century
  • construction
  • public buildings
  • railways
  • infrastructure
  • economic activities
  • housing developments
  • commercial zones
  • environmental concerns
  • deforestation
  • traffic
  • urban sprawl
  • notable architecture
  • landmarks
  • urbanization
  • expansion
  • modernization
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