You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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bar chart indicates the Verb problem
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rate
of men and women from Australia who were involved in five different levels of post-education credentials in the year of
1999.
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Overall
, there were five categories of certifications among which the rate
of male participants was the highest for Skilled
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the Skilled
Diploma
category whereas
the lowest portion of male
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males
Undergraduate
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the Undergraduate
Diploma
. In case
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female
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females
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Diploma
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Diplomas
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the Skilled
Diploma
.
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Diplomas
Skilled
Vocational Correct article usage
the Skilled
Diploma
with a value of 90%. Conversely
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females
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Undergraduate
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an Undergraduate
Diploma
and reversely the rate
was 35% for men. The second highest rate
for men was 70% in
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Diploma
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Diplomas
women
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women,
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Bachelor's
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a Bachelor's
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rate
was 60% for male and 40% for female candidates. In Postgraduate
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the Postgraduate
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Bachelor's
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