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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line diagram illustrates how grew and will grow the proportion of population between 2000 and 2050 in the areas of
India
 and
China
.
Overall
, both lines have shown growth from the start. As seen in the illustration,
China
 had the most people in 2000, more precisely 1
billion
 and 250,
while
,
India
's index was nearly
billion
.
India
 depicted a rise and increased by almost 200 million after ten years,
however
, it wasn't enough to overcome the
China
, which index improved by 100 million.
India
 had reached the Chinese past results
,
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 and almost overtook them in 2020. Their rates were 1.3
billion
 and 1.4
billion
, respectively. As can be shown in the pie graph, in the next 10 years two areas will have approximately similar rates, which is 1.45
billion
. The number of persons in
China
 will decrease from year to year and will be a bit more than 1.4
billion
 in 2040 and 1.4
billion
 in 2050.
India
 will continue to increase.
India
 will reach the record with approximately 1.6
billion
 in the
last
 year.
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