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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line diagram illustrates how grew and will grow the proportion of population between 2000 and 2050 in the areas of
India
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 and
China
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.
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, both lines have shown growth from the start. As seen in the illustration,
China
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 had the most people in 2000, more precisely 1
billion
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 and 250,
while
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,
India
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's index was nearly
billion
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.
India
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 depicted a rise and increased by almost 200 million after ten years,
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, it wasn't enough to overcome the
China
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, which index improved by 100 million.
India
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 had reached the Chinese past results
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 and almost overtook them in 2020. Their rates were 1.3
billion
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 and 1.4
billion
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, respectively. As can be shown in the pie graph, in the next 10 years two areas will have approximately similar rates, which is 1.45
billion
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. The number of persons in
China
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 will decrease from year to year and will be a bit more than 1.4
billion
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 in 2040 and 1.4
billion
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 in 2050.
India
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 will continue to increase.
India
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 will reach the record with approximately 1.6
billion
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 in the
last
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 year.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words india, china, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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