The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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illustrate
information about the aims of Change the verb form
illustrates
water
usage
in 6 regions of the world. Overall
, South America
, Africa, Central Asia
and South East Asia
use
water
for irrigation that are
the most popular. Meanwhile, the Change the verb form
is
purpose
of industry accounts the
most proportion in North Change preposition
for the
America
and Europe
.
First and foremost, the amount of water
for different target
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targets
are
similar in North Change the verb form
is
America
and Europe
. Both of
areas consume Change preposition
apply
water
the most common
for Change the word
commonly
industial
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industrial
use
at 48% in North america
and 53% in Change the capitalization
America
Europe
. Moreover
, agricultural usage
ranks second in total water
usage
in North America
and Europe
at 39% and 32% respectively. While
,
the rest Remove the comma
apply
purpose
accounts Change preposition
of purpose
less
than Industrial Change preposition
for less
use
about 3,5 times.
On the other hands
, Irrigation is the main Fix the agreement mistake
hand
purpose
of water
usage
in Africa, Central Asia
, South
East Correct word choice
and South
Asia
above 80%. Using water
for the aim of aggriculture
and domestic is negligible in the above regions, which is about 7 to 9% with domestic and 5 to 12% with industry.
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agriculture
Last
but not least, South America
is a region, which consume
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consumes
water
for irrigation is the most popular purpose
at 71%. Domestic use
and Industrial use
are one fourth
and one seventh respectively of agriculture.Add a hyphen
one-fourth
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