The graph compares the percentage of international students and the percentage of UK learners gaining second class degrees or better at a major UK university.
The bar chart illustrates the difference between the percentage of foreign and local
students
gaining second class
or above degrees at a major UK university.
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second-class
Overall
, it can be noticed that highest
percentage of international learners Correct article usage
the highest
are
chose Information Technology Unnecessary verb
apply
while
sociology is the most chosen for British students
.
Regarding the oversea
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overseas
students
, more than 80% of them chose Information Technology as their field of study and Electrical Engineering Engineering is the second most chosen with almost 80% contribution. Next,
nursing contributes highly with roughly 76%, following Art History by 70% meanwhile Sociology and English Literature had shared presumably 65%. Moreover
, International Law students
had the lowest rate of almost 50%.
On the other hand
, Sociology and Art History had the highest percentage of almost 80% for UK students
. Then
, Nursing and English Literature was
the next high contributing degrees for British Correct subject-verb agreement
were
students
with about 75%. In comparison to International students
, International Law had one of the highest percentages, 70%, while
Electrical Engineering and Information Technology as being the lowest one
with 60% and 57%. Correct pronoun usage
apply
However
, Accountancy shared the same rate of almost 60% with International Students
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