The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. * GDP (Gross Domestic Product) is the total value of goods that are made and services that are provided in a country.
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The bar chart illustrates the total percentages of Gross domestic product for different European countries in three periods of time.
In general, some countries had some increase in products and others
not
. Denmark, Lithuania,Norway and Slovenia Add a missing verb
did not
has
the same amount of Wrong verb form
had
percentages
increase with 1 Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
Per cent
higher in 2012 Correct your spelling
per cent
in compare
to 2002 and 2007. France showed a fluctuation in its Change preposition
compared
propotion
which rose in 2007 to reach 11% and Correct your spelling
proportion
promotion
then
it
dropped to Correct pronoun usage
apply
be
9% in 2012. Unnecessary verb
apply
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The Netherland
Netherland
showed a steady amount of decrease through the years withFix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
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per cent decline in each period. Estonia seems to be the lowest country in Europe for providing gross domestic product with only 3% Correct article usage
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while
France presents the highest percentage in single
year in 2007 with 11 per cent.
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Overall
, Belgium , Estonia, Swetzelan
and Spain remained steady in proportions through all three periods with Belgium still the highest among these countries.Correct your spelling
Switzerland
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