Lower the line graph shows the percentage of tourist to England who visited for not similar attractions in Brighton.
Lower the line graph shows the percentage of
tourist
to England who visited for not similar attractions in Brighton.
We can see that Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
pier
in the last
place, and in the first place is pavilion
. Add an article
a pavilion
the pavilion
This
graph line shows us that the situation happened between 1980 to 2010. Pavillion
in 1980 was 25% but after Correct article usage
The pavillion
few
years Correct article usage
a few
is
steadily Correct your spelling
it
rise
to Wrong verb form
rose
the
50% in 1995. Correct article usage
apply
By contrast
festival
Correct article usage
the festival
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
start
with Wrong verb form
started
the
30% and is the highest start. The trend for the festival was similar to the pavilion.
Correct article usage
apply
Percentage
of tourists to Correct article usage
The percentage
pier
was lower than Add an article
the pier
other
places. Tourists to the Change preposition
in other
pier
rise
significantly. Wrong verb form
have risen
Pier
starts with 10% from 1980 to 2010. Piers graph also
ended the year up from 10% to 22%. But by the way art gallery was the least popular. It was steadily fall from 22% to 7%Submitted by dnm.best on
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