The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of free
time
enjoyed by males and
females
of five different kinds of employment status.
Overall
it can be seen that the most popular who preferred to enjoy in free
time
were people who did not work and people who are retired ,
whereas
people who have a job in full
time
have the lowest amount of free
time
to enjoy.
To begin
with, males and
females
who are unemployed and retired have the same amount of leisure
time
to have fun which was around 80 males and 78
females
. The most interesting notice is that there are no men
in
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employed
part-timetime
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part-time
and in housewives around 50
females
preferred to enjoy in free
time
as housewives and in employed
part-timetime
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part-time
40.
On the other hand
, there are men
in
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employed full-
time
time
approximately 44 ,
while
females
are around 38.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, females with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • leisure time
  • employment status
  • full-time employment
  • part-time employment
  • unemployed
  • retired
  • housewives
  • gender comparison
  • notable differences
  • allocate time
  • trend analysis
  • work-life balance
  • time management
  • societal norms
  • economic factors
  • gender-specific trends
  • employment transition
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