The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of free
time
enjoyed by males and females
of five different kinds of employment status.
Overall
it can be seen that the most popular who preferred to enjoy in free time
were people who did not work and people who are retired , whereas
people who have a job in full time
have the lowest amount of free time
to enjoy.
To begin
with, males and females
who are unemployed and retired have the same amount of leisure time
to have fun which was around 80 males and 78 females
. The most interesting notice is that there are no men in
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part-timetime
and in housewives around 50 Correct your spelling
part-time
females
preferred to enjoy in free time
as housewives and in employed part-timetime
40.
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part-time
On the other hand
, there are men in
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time
time
approximately 44 , while
females
are around 38.Submitted by maha.wed on
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