The two graphs below show the percentage of smokers and the consumption of alcohol in liters in selected countries for the period 1960-2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two graphs illustrate trends in daily smoking rates and alcohol

consumptions

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consumption

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(in

liters

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litres

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per

persons

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person

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) from 1960 to 2000 for various

country’s

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countries

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. The first graph reveals

an

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consistent decline in smoking across the

USA

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, Japan, and

Holland

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. In 1960, Japan

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the highest smoking rate at 60%,

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Holland

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had the lowest rate

of

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at

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40%. By 2000, smoking has significantly

decrease

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decreased

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in all

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countries

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, with Japan and

USA

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showing nearly identical

rate’s

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rates

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, both around 20%.

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present

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alcohol consumption trends in Turkey,

Holland

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, and

USA

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. Between 1960 and 1980, all countries experienced

an

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sharp rise in

consumptions

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consumption

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, peeking around 1980. The

USA

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shown

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the highest consumption at over 10

liters

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litres

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,

while

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Turkey

remaining

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below 2

liters

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litres

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throughout

this

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periods

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. In

conclusions

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,

smoking

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the smoking

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rate’s

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rate

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dropped

consistent

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consistently

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,

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alcohol

consumptions

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consumption

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increased until 1980 before

declined

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in

Holland

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and

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USA

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, but

remains

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steady in Turkey.